You do a great job with dialog. It's got a nice flow to it and you always know who's talking. I'm still getting the hang of this, trying to cut down on "he said/she said" fluff.
Thank you Mask. I find if your characters have distinctive voices and you throw in the names every couple of exchanges you can streamline it quite a bit. Plus keep exchanges short. It’s more natural.
You do a great job with dialog. It's got a nice flow to it and you always know who's talking. I'm still getting the hang of this, trying to cut down on "he said/she said" fluff.
Great read!
Thank you Mask. I find if your characters have distinctive voices and you throw in the names every couple of exchanges you can streamline it quite a bit. Plus keep exchanges short. It’s more natural.