CHAPTER ONE – Ed the Ted
Steve- There's something about the way you wrote Ed the Ted that gave me a very full picture of his character--complete with his setting, surrounding, and places that both darken and lighten the lines on his face. I'd say: this is effective writing.
Thank you E.T. !!
Really enjoyable noir prose and an intriguing sci-fi twist? Sign me up!
Thank you Larry. I hope to continue to enrich both aspects as the work progress. It was kind of you to take the time to comment.
Really liked the voice in this. Plus the weirdness.
Steve- There's something about the way you wrote Ed the Ted that gave me a very full picture of his character--complete with his setting, surrounding, and places that both darken and lighten the lines on his face. I'd say: this is effective writing.
Thank you E.T. !!
Really enjoyable noir prose and an intriguing sci-fi twist? Sign me up!
Thank you Larry. I hope to continue to enrich both aspects as the work progress. It was kind of you to take the time to comment.
Really liked the voice in this. Plus the weirdness.